O.W.EN. AND OTHER STUFF

Hey guys so whats up peep lol i 'm just saying hi and that i am on my 21st chapter so i have 9 more to go and when the actual story is complete i just have to edit then i am actually finished! i'm hoping to be completely finished before Christmas break! oh i wrote a poem! i was thinking about it in P.E. then i actually got to writting it down in science class so i have no i dea what we learned on friday! lol well its in haiku form but its like an on-going haiku like stanza after stanza i just made up that form but if its a real form then i might send it in to people cuz i actually like it! so here it is!:

Scars

The scars on his face

Are like the scars on my heart

They are from the pain

That you gave to us

Unwillingly we took them

And proudly we did

To save those we love

Though the scars will never fade

And the memories

Yeah, the memories

They will never go away

What you gave to us

You should not be proud

For what you gave and you took

What we had to see

Witness what you did

What you undoubtedly said

That we had to hear

You should not be proud

For these scarsyou gave to us

Yet scars do not fade

Eventually

These open wounds cover up

Left with ugly scars

Together we stand

Those you've wounded stand their ground

Tell you what they found

The wounded tell you

How they've changed and forgot you

And their ugly scars

They are not seen

They're still there, but you are gone

Gone, not remebered

Though you are gone now

The scars still stay, but we live

We live with no more fear

You should not be proud

For what you have done, but we

Are forever free

Yups hat what i did in science... tell me what you think! oh and i think, i'm pretty sure that i am gonna start a blog dedicated to my story. I'll probably do it sometime today, it depends how nice Blogger is being to me lol so yea byes!

-pebbles