Hey guys so whats up peep lol i 'm just saying hi and that i am on my 21st chapter so i have 9 more to go and when the actual story is complete i just have to edit then i am actually finished! i'm hoping to be completely finished before Christmas break! oh i wrote a poem! i was thinking about it in P.E. then i actually got to writting it down in science class so i have no i dea what we learned on friday! lol well its in haiku form but its like an on-going haiku like stanza after stanza i just made up that form but if its a real form then i might send it in to people cuz i actually like it! so here it is!:
Scars
The scars on his face
Are like the scars on my heart
They are from the pain
That you gave to us
Unwillingly we took them
And proudly we did
To save those we love
Though the scars will never fade
And the memories
Yeah, the memories
They will never go away
What you gave to us
You should not be proud
For what you gave and you took
What we had to see
Witness what you did
What you undoubtedly said
That we had to hear
You should not be proud
For these scarsyou gave to us
Yet scars do not fade
Eventually
These open wounds cover up
Left with ugly scars
Together we stand
Those you've wounded stand their ground
Tell you what they found
The wounded tell you
How they've changed and forgot you
And their ugly scars
They are not seen
They're still there, but you are gone
Gone, not remebered
Though you are gone now
The scars still stay, but we live
We live with no more fear
You should not be proud
For what you have done, but we
Are forever free
Yups hat what i did in science... tell me what you think! oh and i think, i'm pretty sure that i am gonna start a blog dedicated to my story. I'll probably do it sometime today, it depends how nice Blogger is being to me lol so yea byes!
-pebbles
